Desk Top Crits...
This morning our Retail Retold studio had desk-top critiques to review work done thus far. It seems as though my group's "concept" of graffiti was appreciated by those I spoke with. During my first critique with Jackie, it was expressed that the several main aspects i was wanting to incorporate into the space (the centralized floor cut-out w/ local art display, the window panels with colored panes/stencil graffiti art-work, and the layered circular floor plan,) are definitely worth pursuing and building-upon. During my second critique with Emily, I was encouraged to enhance the notion I had surrounding "natural graffiti." It was really interesting how I shared similar ideas with both of my critique partners. Jackie and I both wanted to incorporate an opening within the space that exposed the top floor to the bottom and vice-versa. Emily and I both shared an appreciation for the nature encompassing the area.
Although the concept of graffiti was welcomed and respected, I was advised to target in on one or two key features of graffiti and focus on incorporating those features of graffiti into the space in a more abstracted way. Overall I found this mini-critique very useful as an opportunity to gather and organize my thoughts as preparation for moving on to the next step in the process of designing the retail space of Revolution Mill.